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Thursday, April 9, 2020

A Lamp, Or A Smile?

Day nine of the #NaPoWriMo prompt was once again too interesting to be ignored simply due to a self imagined lack of poetic vein. NaPoWriMo prompt said: "Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a “concrete” poem – a poem in which the lines and words are organized to take a shape that reflects in some way the theme of the poem."

So, here I present to you, my concrete poetry: about something that brings light in the lives of all of us!

 white wonder 
cast upon a sheet of dark grey night.
Shimmering, glittering, binding all beings- 
a wondrous spell, bathed in soothing
dreams of hope and light.
A smile.
as a beam
of sunlight.
As you look at the smile,
forget not: to check
if they reached the eyes.

Hope you liked it! You can drop me feedback in the comments below. And hey, I'm still working on that poetry angle, excuse me! 

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